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Writing for Kids - First
off, let me warn you all: every parent, grandparent, teacher, and
librarian dreams of writing a kids’ book. A lot of them actually
write one and send it off to one or more publishers. The
"slush pile" is the stack of unsolicited manuscripts in
the offices of the children’s editors. It’s high and most of
it is not publishable. But editors know that hidden in there are a
few gems, so the manuscripts are all read….by someone.
Often hired readers do the initial screening. An experienced
reader can tell a book that is hopeless in the first few lines.
The editorial assistants do more screening; and finally the few
good manuscripts make it to an editor who might consider acquiring
it. The final decision is often a committee decision and even the
marketing people have a say.
A really outstanding book will make it through; editors do like
to discover new talent, but it’s a very competitive world.
Remember that editors are also looking at manuscripts that that
come in directly from published writers and from agents
representing writers. Those go into a different pile…but there
is no sure thing. I have a big file of manuscripts that never made
it into books. You are only as good as the manuscript they’re
reading.
Let me digress for a second here and talk to those of you who
are thinking that you’d like me to read and comment on your
particular manuscript. I don’t do it. Partly because I don’t
have the time and partly because I really don’t know what the
publishers are looking for. Sometimes I spend an hour or two in
the children’s section of a bookstore and I can’t find any
books that I would have encouraged if I’d seen them in
manuscript form. Which may be why I have that big pile of
unpublished manuscripts. You don’t want my opinion.
OK. Back to the nitty gritty. Unless you are a fine illustrator
and can compete with the talent that is available to editors, don’t
try to get the book illustrated on your own. Just sell your words.
I have never met any of my illustrators. An editor considers it
her or his creative contribution to make a good match. If you lock
yourself into an illustrator, you are creating a liability. The
editor has to like not only your words but also the illustrator
that you have chosen. If you think you have the perfect
illustrator, wait until you sell the words and then ask the editor
if you can submit some sketches. But never lock yourself in. The
editor may have bought your book because she’s looking for the
perfect vehicle of a Caldecott winner.
If your book is for young kids, the 32-page kind, do a
"dummy," a page of text for each page of the book. Study
some books. Count the pages so you know where you want to begin
(page 3 or page 4). Odd numbers are always on the right, even ones
on the left. If you need something in the picture that isn’t
written in the words, write the illustrator a note on that page.
And remember, if it is meant to be fully illustrated, you don’t
have to describe in words what the reader will see in the picture.
Just be sure the illustrator knows what you have in mind. Keep the
description down and the words minimal. (You might want to look at
some books that talk about the difference between picture books
and easy to read books.)
If your book is fiction and short, you really have to write the
whole thing. If it’s fiction and long, you’ll need a few
chapters and a full summary, chapter by chapter, of the whole
book. If it’s non-fiction, you can try a query letter. There are
lots of books about writing kids’ books that will give you more
details and sample query letters.
You can send to more than one editor, but don’t waste your
(and their) time sending to houses that don’t do the kind of
book you’ve written. Check the bookstores for your genre and see
who is doing your kind of book. Also check (in the children’s
room of a library) the spring and fall issues of Publisher’s
Weekly which have ads from all the publishers. You can see which
ones will be receptive to your genre.
Having said all that, I have to be honest and say that I have
always had an agent. I hate the business end of things. Agents get
15% of everything you earn forever (on the books they sell).
Getting an agent isn’t easy if it’s your first time out. Pick
up a copy of Jeff Herman’s book on literary agents and
publishers. It’s updated annually and worth studying. If you can’t
locate it, try Literary Marketplace; they have a section on
agents. Don’t send your manuscript to agents that charge to read
it.
Always double space. Don’t package your book…just
paper-clip the pages together (they make copies) and send it off.
If it’s long, get a box, but don’t get it bound. And after
about ten rejections, revisit the book and try to figure out why
it’s being rejected. I have to do that to my pile one of these
days.
And worst of all…..expect to wait forever for an answer, even
a rejection. Six months is not unusual. Even from agents. And
sometimes they never respond. Especially today when they know you
can just print out another copy. They are not holding a precious
original.
Royalties are usually 10% of the cover price (hard cover) which
the author splits with the illustrator if there is one; 6% on
paperback, also split with an illustrator (3% and 3%). You may be
able to get an escalating clause that will give you more royalty
if the book goes over a certain number of sales.
You will get a part of the advance when you sign the contract,
some more when the manuscript is finalized, and the rest when the
book is published. This varies with publisher and author and
agent.
I’ve been out of the look for a long time, but I think most
kids’ books get an advance between three and six thousand
dollars. Hold out for a percent of the cover price, not net.
The advance is an advance against royalties, which means that
if you get a three-thousand-dollar advance, you will not get any
more money until the royalties due you equal three thousand
dollars….until the book "earns out." That means that
if the cover price of your paperback is four dollars and your
royalty is 3%, you will earn 12 cents a book. But before you see
any more money, the book has to sell 25,000 copies.
Oh yeah. You will get a royalty statement every six months.
They hold onto your money for six months and get another three or
four months to write the check, which means you will know how the
book is doing nine or ten months after it is published.
This is not a profession for the faint hearted. Many, probably
most books never get any more money after the advance. So don’t
quit your day job.
Before I leave, I would like to recommend the SCBWI (Society of
Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators) conferences. They’re
all over the country (the only one I have been to is the one in LA
in August…I used to go every year). They do a wonderful job of
making everyone feel welcome and you can even get college credit
for it. Their website is www.scbwi.org.
Good luck.
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